I think there is a grammatical mistake in this question—the preposition “of” is left out. So, the question should be “people of your age” (see below).
I am going to say that the number of university places in my hometown is rather limited. I think university education is very important, and the government should allow more people to receive university education and make it more affordable.
To begin with I am going to explain the importance of university education. Below are some useful ideas:
The importance of a university educationA university education produces well-educated and independent-thinking citizens.It prepares students for employment.It increases students’ competitive edge.It increases an individual’s job opportunities and earning potential.It contributes to the productivity and competitiveness of the economy.
Then I will go on to explain how the government can help poor young people to have the chance to receive university education.
✨Underprivileged students may face financial difficulties in pursuing their university education, because their families cannot afford the high tuition fees and living costs.
✨In view of this situation the government should ensure equal opportunities for all students.
✨Different types of financial aid, for example, merit-based financial aid and need-based financial aid can be provided to give financial support to students.
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